奇奇 童话

秋石

　  　　我的名字叫奇奇。我是一只老鼠，有七个兄弟姐妹，但在我们出生后不久，他们就被一群小孩给抓走了，我是唯一的幸存者。我父母回来后，他们伤心欲绝，连夜搬家，我们由草堆里迁到了地洞里。我也就有了新家。洞里很黑，但爸妈告诉我洞里安全。他们从不许我出去。每次我吵得不行了，他们才带我出去，但都跟着我寸步不离，我一点自由都没有。他们也每次只到了晚上才带我出去，可我想白天出去看看，他们就是不答应。终于有一天，我哭闹得不行，他们答应带我出去了。爸爸先出去了，叫我跟妈妈在洞里等一会，然后他才回来，说外面安全，妈妈这才带我出去。我不知道他们为什么就不让我出洞。他们总是给我找回好吃的，可我想自己出去找吃的，他们总是说外面太危险了，他们说不想再失去我。
  
    　“就在这房子里，哪也别去。”我们出去后，爸爸回头说道。我点了点头，可在心里，我却急着想到处看看。可他们死死地盯住我。终于，我得到了一个逃跑的机会，终于逃出了他们的视线，来到了另一个房间。为了不让他们发现，我立即逃到了更远的地方，我突然发现视线一下子宽广了。原来我已经来到了外面。只见我的前面有一个比我大得多的怪物蹲在那里。我想跟他打个招呼。他是我认识的第一个活生物，我想知道他叫什么。我心里既紧张又兴奋，朝他慢慢地移了过去。我想他心情肯定不好，一个人蹲在那里发呆。我说了声你好。他转过了头，他看到我后眼睛亮了起来。他站了起来，朝我走了过来。我想跟他交个朋友，我朝他笑了笑。他张开了嘴，露出了很尖很大的牙齿。他的笑容可不像我想的那么和善，但终究是一个笑容，我又朝他笑了笑。但突然之间，我只感到有一道黑影窜到了我身前，挡在了我前面。是爸爸。
  
   　“快带他走。”他大声地吼道。我看到他的身子在颤抖。那个怪物有一阵子看上去像是被震惊了一样，但他马上又张开了嘴。我不知道爸爸为什么这么害怕。他应该对人友好。但我还是被我妈妈带走了。那怪物还没跟我说你好呢。为什么爸爸跟妈妈那么怕他呢？
  　　回来后，妈妈很生气。她全身都在颤抖。我以前从没有见过她这样。但从那以后，我就再也没有见过爸爸了。
“再也不许出去了。”妈妈说道，但我没过多久就又感到厌烦了。她每天给我取回食物。她告诉我那天碰到的是一只狗，是他把爸爸给吃了。但我不相信，如果真的是这样，也只怪爸爸对那狗不友好。他就没有吃我，还对我笑呢。但妈妈从此就不在白天出洞了。白天她就在洞里陪着我，只有到了晚上才出去，但也只是出去一会就立即回来，我根本没有机会出去。但后来她就越来越忙了，她取回的东西也明显增多，她把那些事物都储藏了起来。有时她白天也出去，但这都是在我睡着之后。（我之所以知道她白天开始出去是因为我有一天睡醒后发现她不在，我听到响声后就继续装睡，她发现我还在睡后就又出去了。）我有了个好主意。一天，当她又出去后，我终于一个人走了出去。

　　　我高兴极了，开始在房子里溜达了起来，但我突然发现了妈妈。我吓了一跳，想着又要挨骂了，但却发现她用异样的眼光看着我，然后她就笑了。我心里纳闷极了，但我突然听到她说：“多么丑的老鼠啊！”我这才发现她只是与妈妈长得很像而已，我不知道世界上除了我跟妈妈之外还有跟我们长得相象的东西。原来我们都叫老鼠。她看起来跟妈妈一样的漂亮。只见她跑了出去，然后就带着一大群老鼠跑了进来，他们全都看着我哈哈大笑。说他们从来没有见过这么肥，这么丑的老鼠。他们全都看起来又强壮又漂亮，还有柔顺的皮毛。我心里难受急了。他们把我带到了一个地方，在那你我又看到了很多的老鼠，其中真的有一只又肥又丑，毛是松散的，看起来真是丑陋极了。
“看，这就是你。真是太丑了。”他们全都哈哈大笑着说，还对我指手画脚。
“不，这肯定不是我。”我大声地叫道，眼泪都流出来了。
“你们在这干什么？”我突然听到了妈妈的声音。
“哦，你快来看，这只老鼠真丑。”他们立刻指着我说。
“妈妈，我是不是真的很丑啊？”我走到妈妈身边问道。
“什么？他是你儿子？”他们不敢相信地问道，“可你跟我们说你儿子长得很漂亮的。”
“我们回去吧。”妈妈对我说道。
“妈妈，我为什么看起来与他们不同呢？我为什么这么丑呢？”一回到洞里我就问道。
“不，亲爱的。你是与他们不同，可你是世界上最漂亮的老鼠。”妈妈说道，可他们的笑声却还在我的脑海里震荡。
“不，我不相信，我要出去，我要跟他们一样在外面。”我哭道，再也抑制不住泪水了。
“亲爱的，他们都应该呆在洞里的。”
“可他们为什么又在外面呢？”
“因为他们不像你一样的乖啊。亲爱的，你是一个乖孩子。来，尝尝这块蛋糕。可好吃了。”


我对妈妈的话半信半疑，但我抑制不住蛋糕的香味，拿起蛋糕吃了起来。
那晚，我做了一个梦，在梦里，我跟他们一样的健壮，一样的漂亮，还有柔顺的皮毛，可醒来后，我发现我流泪了。
几天后，趁妈妈不在，我又出去了。
“哦，你们看，丑老鼠又出来了。”但我一出去，另一只老鼠就大叫了起来，然后其他老鼠就都出来了。现在我知道妈妈对我说了慌，他们可以自由地出来，而我不能。可他们的目光与话语激怒了我。我不喜欢他们说我肥，说我丑。
“不，我不丑。我妈妈说了我是世界上最漂亮的老鼠。”我朝他们大声地说道。但我的话语只使他们都笑得前翻后仰，有的甚至站在了他们的后退上，还拍着肚皮大声地说：笑死人了，笑死人了。
我再也不想看到他们了，我跑了出去。但我感到很难移动步子，我只感到没走多久就气喘吁吁了。
“看看，他走路都很吃力，他根本跑不动的。”他们跟着我，在后面大笑着。但突然，我又看到那怪物出现了。

“帮我，”我朝他大声地叫道，“帮我。他们都嘲笑我，你帮我赶走他们。”我继续朝他叫道。我想他是我的朋友，他一定会帮我的。我看到他张开了嘴，他又朝我笑了。他伸出了他的爪子，在我身上磨蹭着。他想跟我玩呢。其他人都嘲笑我，只有他对我好，还跟我玩。我感到痒痒的，忍不住笑了起来。但是没过多久他就掉头走了。
“喂，你去哪呀？”我问道，“我想再跟你玩会。”但他头也不回地走了。我想跟上他，可我移动得太慢了，跟不上。
“哦，哦，”然后我就又听到那些老鼠的叫声了。他们语气很是惊讶，好像不敢相信似的。我知道为什么，那怪物只跟我玩。他只喜欢我。
“你居然还能活着。他居然放过你了。”他们说道。
“说什么呀，他喜欢我。”我不无骄傲地说道。
“什么？”他们又开始笑了，但我也看到妈妈朝我们走了过来。我真想跑过去跟她讲我的故事。
“亲爱的，你在这做什么呀？跟我回去吧。”她说道，语气很温柔。我原以为她会骂我一顿的。
“哦。你儿子认为那狗喜欢他呢。”那些老鼠用一种嘲讽的语气说道。
“就是就是，妈妈。那狗喜欢我。他只跟我一个人玩。他都不跟他们玩。”我再一次骄傲的说道，可我又听到他们笑了。
“跟你玩？哦，他是想吃你。但看看你。谁愿意吃一只这么丑的老鼠呢？那狗准是怕弄脏了他的牙，吃坏了他的胃。你这个丑东西。”他们说道。他们真是太嫉妒我了。
“他就是喜欢我，他还把爪子放到我背上，替我挠痒痒。真好玩。”我反驳道。
“亲爱的，跟我回去吧。”妈妈说道。但我又看见那怪物来了。他还带来了一个比他小的朋友。这回我可以证明了。我立即迎了上去，跟他们问好。

“你喜欢我，不是吗？”我微笑着问道。但我发现其他老鼠都不见了，一个个往洞里钻。只有妈妈挡在了我面前。
“快跑，跑，跑。”妈妈颤抖着叫道，但我没有动。他是我朋友，我为什么要跑呢？
“请不要吃我儿子，吃我吧，吃我吧。”妈妈说道，可我认为这太可笑了。他们怎么会吃我们呢？我是他们的朋友，她是我妈呀！
“妈妈，他们不会吃我们的啦。他喜欢我，怎么会吃我们呢？”我说道，还想跟他身边的朋友也认识认识。

“不，亲爱的，亲爱的，是他吃了你爹爹。他是我们的天敌。他旁边的是猫，也是我们的敌人。你快跑，否则他们会把我们都吃了的。”妈妈几乎是在求我了，可我仍微笑着看着他们。他们也在看着我，但他们并没有笑。然后他们就用牙齿把我妈妈带走了，我看到妈妈的眼里流出了泪花，还有她身体里流出的红色液体。从此以后，我就再也没有见过我妈妈了。那些老鼠说我妈妈被那狗跟猫给吃了。他们以后见了我也只是摇头叹气。
从此，我终于获得了自由。

秋石

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Qiqi
　  My name is Qiqi. In Chinese it’s 奇奇，but now I have to say it’s 凄凄.Here is my story.
  　 I’m a mouse. I used to have five brothers and sisters. However, one day they were all taken away by three boys. I was the only one left. Mom and daddy felt very sad of course.
　
　　 Later, we moved out of the hay into a hole, our new home. It’s dark there but mom and daddy told me it’s safe there. They asked me to stay in and never allow me to go out and every time when I really got bored and asked them to take me out, they would accompany me. But it’s only in the night. However, I’m eager to go out in the daytime. One day, they finally agreed. But before I went out, my daddy asked me to stay in for a little longer. He went out and then came back and said it’s safe outside. I didn’t know why they didn’t let me go out myself. They took back the food and never asked me to do it myself. I wanted to do it myself as they did. But they forbid me. They told me it’s dangerous outside and I was their only child.

　　  “Stay in this room.” Daddy said when we were out. I agreed, but in my heart, I said no. I wanted to know the world somewhere else. They always kept an eye on me but then finally I got a chance and fled into another room. It’s quiet there. In order not to be found, I decided to go somewhere farther, which I did. Then I suddenly found there was no wall in front of me, but a big living monster. I wanted to say Hello to him. I wanted to know who he was. So I went close to him. He must feel depressed because he was quiet there. I said Hello. He turned back. His eyes were lit when he saw me. He got up and walked towards me. I wanted to make friends with him. So I smiled and said Hello again. He opened his mouth and I saw his teeth, big and sharp. His smile was not so graceful, but it’s still a smile so I smiled back. But all of a sudden, I felt something burst out and blocked my way. It’s daddy.

　　  “Take him away.” He shouted, but didn’t look back. I saw his body shaking. For a moment that monster seemed shocked but then he opened his mouth again. I didn’t know why father was so frightened. He should be nice to others. But I was taken away by my mom. I didn’t want to go. I didn’t get his Hello. He might want to say Hello to me. Why were daddy and mom so afraid of him?

　　 Mom was very angry when we got back. She was shaking. I never saw her like this before. From then on, I didn’t see daddy again.
  “Never go out again.” Said mom and I got bored of it. She took back the food as before. She told me my daddy was killed by that monster that they called dog. But I didn’t believe it. I just knew daddy was rude to that dog. But mom never went out in the daytime and in the night, she just went out for a while every time. I didn’t have a chance to go out. But then my mom got busier and busier. She took the food and stored it. At first she went out only in the night but then one day she finally went out in the daytime. I didn’t know it because I was asleep. Then when I woke up I found he was not there. When she came back I pretended to be sleeping and several days later, after I found he was out longer and longer and she believed I was asleep all the time, I got out.
  
　　There I saw a living thing that looked like mom. But once he saw me, he laughed.  
　  “Oh. What a big fat ugly thing.” He said, laughingly. He was a strong one! He then rushed away and before I got out of the room, I saw many mice coming out. They all laughed at my figure when they saw me. I got depressed. They all look beautiful and strong and they had smooth hair. They took me to a place where I saw many mice facing us. But among them, there was a big fat mouse.
  “Look. It’s you. Look how ugly you are.” They laughed and said.
  “No. It’s not me.” I cried and shouted.
  “What are you doing here?” Suddenly I heard mom’s voice.
  “Oh. Look, how ugly he is!” They pointed to me and said.
  “Mom. Am I so ugly?” I asked.
  “What? He is your son?” they asked. “You told us your son is beautiful.”
  “Lets go back!” mom came to me and said.
  “Mom, why am I different? Why am I ugly?” once we were back, I asked.
  “No. Dear. You are not different. You are the most beautiful one in mom’s heart.” Mom said, but the laughter was always in my head.
  “No. I don’t believe it. I want to go out. I want to go out as they do.” I cried and I couldn’t stop it.
  “Dear. They also should stay at home.”
  “Then why were they out?’
  “They are just not good kids. Dear, you are a good child. Here. Have a taste of this cake. It’s delicious.
  I still had something to say, but I couldn’t resist the smell of the cake. In my dream, I was like them. I was as strong as they were. My hair was smooth too. I had to doubt mom’s words.
  The next day, I got out again.
  “Oh. Look, the ugly fat mouse is out again.” But once I was seen by another one, he shouted and many others came out. Now I believed mom lied to me. They could come out any time they wanted. But I got angry. I didn’t like the word Ugly or Fat.
  “No. I’m not ugly. My mom said I was the most beautiful mouse in the world.” I shouted. But my words stirred their laughter. Some even stood on their back legs.
  I didn’t want to see them. I ran out. I wanted to stay out. But I felt it’s so hard for me to move. I became out of breath.
  “Oh. Look. The mouse even couldn’t move.” They followed me and laughed behind me. But suddenly I saw that monster again.
  “Help me.” I cried. “Help me.” They laughed at me! Help me.” I cried to him. I thought he was my only friend because I ever said Hello to him. I saw he open it’s mouth. He got close to me and put his front right claws on me. He wanted to play with me. Oh, he was the only one who was kind to me. The others all laughed at me. I felt itchy and I laughed. But then he turned away.
  “Hey. Where are you going?” I asked. I wanted to play with him a little longer. But he just walked away. I wanted to follow him, but I couldn’t move fast. I had to move slowly.
  “Oh. Oh.” Then I heard the mouse again. They exclaimed. I knew why. The big monster just liked me. He played with me, though they were all behind me, he just played with me.
  “You are still alive. He let you go.” They said.
  “How? He likes me.” I said proudly.
  “What?” They laughed again, but then I saw my mom coming to me. She smiled when she saw me there. But I wanted to tell her my story!
  “Dear, what are you doing here?” She said, to my surprise, because I thought she would be angry with me.
  “Oh. He thinks the dog likes him.” They said, in a funny way.
  “Yes. Yes. Mom. The dog only likes me. He just played with me. He didn’t play with them.” I said proudly and I heard laughter again.
  “Play with you? Oh. He wanted to eat you. but look, how ugly you are. Even the dog doesn’t want to eat you. You fat thing.” They said. Of course I didn’t believe them. They were just jealous.
  “He likes me. He put his claws on me and smelt me. It makes me itchy. What fun!” I said.
  “Dear. Go back with me!” My mom said. But I saw the monster again and he came with a friend. I became glad. I would prove they were wrong. So I said Hello to him and smiled.  
  “You like me, don’t you?” I asked smilingly. But I found all the others had run away immediately they saw them except mom. She stood before me.
  “Run, run, run.” Mom shouted to me. But I refuse to move. He was my friend and his friend was also my friend. Why should I run away in the presence of friends?
  “Please don’t eat my son. Please eat me instead.” Mom said. But I thought it’s fun. How could they eat us? I was their friend and she was my mom!
  “Mom. He is not going to eat me. He likes me!” I said and wanted to say Hello to my new friend.

　　 “No. Dear. Dear. He ate your daddy. He is our enemy. Run away, or they will eat both of us.” Mom almost begged. But I just smiled towards them. They looked at me too. But they didn’t smile. Then they took away my mom with their mouth, teeth in her body. I saw red liquid bursting out. I was shocked. And I finally believed what mom said was true.
  
　　I didn’t see mom again but sometimes I did see that monster. Now I knew he was my enemy and he would eat me. I tried to run away but every time when he saw me, he didn’t run after me. He just shook his head and then walked away. But I did know he always ran after the others and ate them when he caught them. So I was supposed to live a comfortable life then. The dog didn’t eat me and my mom stored the food for me and I could come out any time I want. But things were not always as good as it should be. One day, I was taking a walk in the room, and all of a sudden, I heard a boy cry.
  “Look. What a big fat mouse here.” This time I didn’t believe he was my friend so I tried to run away. But I was too fat to escape. He caught me without any difficulty. He showed me to the other boys.
  “What a fat mouse.” Everyone who saw me exclaimed.
  “It must have a lot of fat. Lets have fun.” Said a boy. Then he took out a small box and I saw he put the box close to my tail and then I felt it hurt. It’s burning. I struggled to run away, but I was too fat to run. I was burnt and the burning lasted for a long time and it gained the boys’ applause.
  “I swear he has the most fat.” They said. “He must be a very lazy mouse.”
  Am I lazy? I didn’t want to be lazy! I became fat before I knew it. Is it my fault? Perhaps it is not.

alexander

Well done! You must have past band 6 or higher.

秋石

我是英语专业的,我喜欢用英语写作,写的时候比较顺手.

alexander

難怪.
強啊.文章寫的又好