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整理作文资料Ing。。。
开头
背景描述
两派观点
From my perspective
Preview
结尾
Restate
好事预测
坏事建议
TS:
First and formost
Of equal importance
Not only…but also
Further lending credence to my position is the fact that
Admittedly…however
TS
Reason why/what/who/how
Exemplification
Statistics/details
Celebrity
Compare&contrast点下分点
For instance
It can be aptly exemplified by the case of…who…/by the following case…
I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the following case…
An apt/fitting/telling/striking example/case is that
Nowhere in the world can I find a better example than…
When it comes to…
…comes immediately into my mind
Imagine/visualize
例子的来源pool of examples
1 Personal experiences/story
creativity成功的条件 adversity逆境出人才 大学教育 authority/celebrity
2 Academic
Newton: the law of Gtavity
Darwin: evolutionism/the law of evolution the origin of spicies
Einstein: Relativity Theory
Hawking: a brief history of time wheelchair obstacle/barrier
3 Socialized example
4 Fabricated
5 statistics
补充句型
Remedy=method
Exorbitantly=expensive
归功于
Technology contributes to people’s longevity most=people’s longevity can be attributed to …
Attribute属性n.
合作 collaborate v. collaborative a. coordinate v. teamwork n.
Many surveys/investigations/statistic figures indicate/demonstrate/reveal that….
People in mounting numbers are beginning to be aware that a growing numbers of universities have attached significant importance to the credit which probably would bring about unexpectedly negative consequences
Attach significant/considerable importance to=place great emphasis/stress on
As is demonstrated in China daily/in the latest edition of China daily…
机构campus开头 organization/association/society结尾
无法取代irreplaceable
Aspiration/inspiration/perspiration
Vision/passion/.mission
A比B好 A take precedence over B
Without A…
In the past…
On the contrary
It is not difficult to imagine that…
强调it’s modern technology that makes our life alive,colorful,convenient
多样 diverse/vibrant/dynamic
Without which, our life could probably pale
倒装 hardly can I imagine a world devoid of/without…
思路篇
Things and behaviors
Efficient
convenient
economical
*durable
environmentally friendly
cultural communication
*moral
Technological / in this technologically advanced society
/in this information explosion era
Impact on people
Healty
Joy relaxation/recreation
A sense of achievement
Characteristics smart/optimistic/diligence
*emotion
Ability: cooperative/collaborative/teamwork spirit /coordinate effort
Creativity/innovative / innovation
Logical thinking ability
Analytical /critical ability
Independent thinking ability
Knowledge and experience expand one’s horizon &enrich one’s knowledge
扩大知识面增加视野
Other people
托福写作八大能力
Communication ability oral&written
Interpersonal ability
Independent thinking ability
Logical thinking ability
Analytical thinking ability
Leadership
Cooperation
Innovation
利弊merits and drawbacks advantage and disadvantage
Benefits and drawbacks/disadvantages pros & eons
Outweigh超过
好 have /exert/bring about a ….influence/impact of something
坏 consequence
形容词 好 beneficial/positive/favorable/far-reaching
坏 detrimental/deleterious极其有害/adverse一般有害
e.g. The new generation iBT has brought about an undeniably positive and far-reaching influence on test-takers all around the world, dramatically/considerably changing the way they prepare for the test
补充语言something lay a solid foundation for sth.
Sth. Poses a probable and potential threat to sth.
Attach importance to
Place emphasize on
Play a ..role in sth. Decisive/fundamental
语言篇
四大从句
1因果关系
A can be ascribed to B
A owes a large debt to B
A comes/results/derives from B
A arise/stems from B
Stemming/developing/booming
A is the/a prerequisite to B
A serves as the cornerstone of/to B
+sentence because/for/in that/ reason for something is that
+n. due to/owing to/on account of/with
e.g. the longevity of philosophers owes a large debt to their detachment了无牵挂
2让步关系
Although/ in spite of / despite +n./ despite the fact that…
3 if条件
Suppose…/ on condition that… (<=1)/as (so) long as
4 I believe/cherish an unshakable belief that…
I cling to a steadfast faith that…
e.g. I adhere to a steadfast belief that success is invariably/constantly accomplished by pains and fortitude
In/ ing表达 （两个以上的动词如何处理） variety is the spice of life
S + V1,+V2 and V3
S + V1, +V2ing+…..+AND VNing (V1…VN无主次)
S＋V1 +V2ing = S , V2ing，+V1
Not only…but also并列递进倒装
*ed插入语 compared with
e.g. The importance of other people ,compared with that of a teacher, pales.
The importance of all the other issues, compared with that of iBT, pales.
Nothing can ever equal the role teachers play in our life.
Nothing can ever equal/match the importance of IBT
……plays an irreplaceable role in…
排比
三板斧
1、 倒装 thought-provoking food for thought
主谓倒装 Hardly /seldom
e.g.
hardly can we imagine a world without the enchantment & fascination of television
be enchanted by/ be fascinated with
be addicted to / captivate / obsess
On no account can we equal wealth to health.
ONLY+状语
Only after…/when…/by doing something…. +do we know /can we do ….
NOT ONLY…BUT ALSO
三种倒装每种使用一次
SO…THAT
Eg So fascinating and enchanting is WL that ladies captivated by his beards which are naturally associated with masculinity.
2、 强调 1-3
It is/was 强调部分 that / who+…..
3、 插入语
程度 probably to some /a large extent
同位语 n+ 同+ which +谓
e.g. Greek civilization, the origin/source of Roman culture, which flourished/thrived/boomed/ was prosperous several centuries ago,still exerts an undeniably far-reaching and thought-provoking influence on modern humanities
重复结构
Many foreigners are learning Chinese ,a language which is mysterious
Building blocks积木 be accompanied by |
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